Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we h (2024)

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"Today I was going to meet up with a friend of mine at 9:30 AM, so I woke up earlier but went back to sleep. When I woke up again it was already 9:15 AM so I hurried up because I was already late. Today we picked grapes. It was my first time doing this. It was interesting and the grapes were so tasty. We went to Umie (the shopping mall) which is near my town. My friend gave me a cap as a gift since it was my birthday last month. After shopping, we talked about our childhood and decided to visit our elementary school which we had not visited in a while." "Today I was going to meet up with a friend of mine at 9:30 AM, so I woke up earlier but went back to sleep. When I woke up again it was already 9:15 AM so I hurried up because I was already late. Today we picked grapes. It was my first time doing this. It was interesting and the grapes were so tasty. We went to Umie (the shopping mall) which is near my town. My friend gave me a cap as a gift since it was my birthday last month. After shopping, we talked about our childhood and decided to visit our elementary school which we had not visited in a while." References

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Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we headed to "grape picking". This was my first time. It was interesting and so tasty. After grape picking, we went to "umie"the shopping mall which is located near my town. I got a cap as a gift from the friend because It was my birthday last month. After the shopping we talked about our childhood and we decided to visit our elementary school for the first time in a while. (2)

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"Today I was going to meet up with a friend of mine at 9:30 AM, so I woke up earlier but went back to sleep. When I woke up again it was already 9:15 AM so I hurried up because I was already late. Today we picked grapes. It was my first time doing this. It was interesting and the grapes were so tasty. We went to Umie (the shopping mall) which is near my town. My friend gave me a cap as a gift since it was my birthday last month. After shopping, we talked about our childhood and decided to visit our elementary school which we had not visited in a while."

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Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we headed to "grape picking". This was my first time. It was interesting and so tasty. After grape picking, we went to "umie"the shopping mall which is located near my town. I got a cap as a gift from the friend because It was my birthday last month. After the shopping we talked about our childhood and we decided to visit our elementary school for the first time in a while. (4)

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13 ago 2017

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"Today I was going to meet up with a friend of mine at 9:30 AM, so I woke up earlier but went back to sleep. When I woke up again it was already 9:15 AM so I hurried up because I was already late. Today we picked grapes. It was my first time doing this. It was interesting and the grapes were so tasty. We went to Umie (the shopping mall) which is near my town. My friend gave me a cap as a gift since it was my birthday last month. After shopping, we talked about our childhood and decided to visit our elementary school which we had not visited in a while."

Tip! In some cases, it's better to use "going to" than "gonna". It's much more grammatically correct. Hope this helped! :)

Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we headed to "grape picking". This was my first time. It was interesting and so tasty. After grape picking, we went to "umie"the shopping mall which is located near my town. I got a cap as a gift from the friend because It was my birthday last month. After the shopping we talked about our childhood and we decided to visit our elementary school for the first time in a while. (11)

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Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we headed to "grape picking". This was my first time. It was interesting and so tasty. After grape picking, we went to "umie"the shopping mall which is located near my town. I got a cap as a gift from the friend because It was my birthday last month. After the shopping we talked about our childhood and we decided to visit our elementary school for the first time in a while. (19)

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Could you check and correct my English? What I did today...10 Today I was gonna meet up with a friend of mine 9:30 so I got at 8:30 but I went back to sleep. When I woke up again, it turned 9:15 so I prepared in a hurry no to late for the time. Today we headed to "grape picking". This was my first time. It was interesting and so tasty. After grape picking, we went to "umie"the shopping mall which is located near my town. I got a cap as a gift from the friend because It was my birthday last month. After the shopping we talked about our childhood and we decided to visit our elementary school for the first time in a while. (21)

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